Your uncertain list
Read out the conditionals and comparisons you flagged. For each: what were you unsure about?
The five patterns
Collected across Lessons 1–5
| Pattern | What appears | What it should be | Why it matters |
|---|---|---|---|
| Subjunctive after unless | unless the wall be under four feet | unless the wall is under four feet | PT a menos que takes subjunctive; English does not |
| Preposition after exceed | does not exceed to the limit | does not exceed the limit | Exceed is transitive |
| Reversed burden | unless a wall retains a surcharge | where a wall retains a surcharge | Exempts exactly the case that needs the rule |
| Missing conclusion | Stops after the numbers | …and therefore complies. | Leaves the planner to conclude, or to ask |
| Hedging a certainty | it should be fine for coverage | it is within the permitted coverage | Reads as doubt about a number you are sure of |
Hedging: when it helps and when it hurts
Two kinds of uncertainty
| Situation | Wrong move | Right move |
|---|---|---|
| You know the number | It should be around 1,200. | It is 1,209 square feet. |
| You do not know the rule | It is fine. | I would want to confirm how you treat artificial turf. |
| You know the number, not the limit | It should comply. | Proposed is 1,209. What is the coverage cap for R-1 here? |
| You disagree with their figure | …yes, about that. | I have 1,209 rather than 1,800 — shall I send the table? |
The rule. Hedge the thing you are actually uncertain about, and be exact about everything else. Blanket hedging (should be, roughly, more or less, I think) spreads doubt over facts you have in front of you — and a planner reading that assumes the numbers are soft.
Fix them
Each sentence carries one of the five patterns. Rewrite it.
1. Engineering is not required unless the wall be under four feet.
2. The proposed coverage does not exceed to the permitted maximum.
3. Impervious surface is reduced from 2,963 SF to 1,209 SF, so it should be fine.
4. The design shall account for surcharge unless a wall retains additional load.
5. Proposed impervious surface is around 1,200 square feet, more or less.
Complete each sentence with the correct form of the word in brackets.
- The proposal achieves a 59% in impervious surface. REDUCE
- The revised coverage is fully with the ordinance. COMPLY
- A four-foot wall requires unless it falls within the published tables. ENGINEER
- Saturday hours are to the morning only. RESTRICT
- The turf is treated as in some jurisdictions but not others. PERVIOUS
De-hedge your own writing
Task card
The baseline argument you wrote in Lesson 1
Read it back and strike every hedge that covers a fact you actually know.
- Read it aloud. Hedges are much easier to hear than to see.
- For each one you strike, say the exact figure instead.
- Keep any hedge that covers something genuinely uncertain — and make it more specific, not less.
How many hedges?
Count them. Then answer honestly: were you hedging the numbers, or hedging your English? Those need different fixes, and only one of them is a language problem.
Before the next lesson
Homework. Find the actual lot-coverage or impervious-surface limit that applied to Silverwood Drive. If you cannot find it, note where you looked — next lesson the planner will ask.